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Click here"Yes... yes," Fiona moans, and that's good enough for me. "Knock me up.,." Her pussy dances on my cock, and I pound it into her, hard, 'n she takes it the way a tight wet slippery hot little Korean cunt should take a guy's cock. Willingly. Eagerly. Enthusiastically. Excitedly. Again and again. As much cock as I want to give her, 'n I'm pump-fucking the hot little bitch, slamming her down into the bed with every jack-hammering thrust.
"Yes... yes... yes...," she moans, and it's not so much that she's being made love to. She's not. She's being fucked. She's servicing my cock. Her cunt's a slippery tight cock-sheath that's taking what I want to give her coz the way my cock's ramming into her tight little fuckhole, she knows she's being used and I looking down at the pretty little face as I pound the fuck out of her, I know what Fiona Lee enjoys.
Fiona Lee enjoys being used, and used hard.
I'm gonna do that. I'm gonna use her hard, fuck her good, and I'm gonna knock the hot little Korean bitch up. Pump her fill of my swimmers until her belly swells, 'n fuck, this is a fuckin' great way to end Valentine's Day, and I groan, humping the fuck out of her as I blow my load, filling her little pussy with another fuckload of cum.
"Happy Valentine's Day, Tom" Fiona murmurs a long time later.
"Happy Valentine's Day, Fiona," I murmur back, 'n fuck, it's about the second best Valentine's Day of my life, coz how many times in your life do you get to pop a Valentine's Day Virgin in every orifice she's got, move her in and have her tell you she wants you to knock her up?
Not that fucking often, but hey, it happens, 'n I grin as I slap her ass.
"Blow me until I'm hard, bitch," I growl, lifting her head up using her ponytail as a grab-handle, 'n I push her face down where I want it. "Wrap those lips round my cock and start sucking until it's hard enough to choke you."
She does, right away, 'n I smile, coz that silver virginity ring's reflecting the moonlight where her hand holds my cock for her mouth, 'n the last thing this little Korean bitch is now, is a virgin. Not anymore, and I smile as I push her face down and listen to her choke, coz my cock's hard enough to fill her pretty little mouth now, and my other hand slaps her ass so that she jerks and squeals, and she knows what she's expected to do when I jerk her head up and roll her onto her back.
She spreads.
It's a fast hard fuck, 'n I gotta go hard coz my cock's shot so many loads tonight I got no idea where the fuck the cum's coming from, but I'm good for one last fuck, and it's Fiona Lee that gets it. She gets it hard, and she takes it willingly, and she looks up at me blindly, her cunt doing the pussy dance on me again as I cum, and the little bitch is as good a fuck as Penny, 'n I tell her that. Well, that she's a good fuck, anyhow.
"Fuck, that was good," I grunt, easing outa her and jamming those pillows back under her butt.
"Keep that little ass in the air, honey," I add, 'n I pat her butt, gently this time. "Gotta make sure those swimmers get to where they're supposed to be."
She shivers, and I can just about smell the hot little bitch ovulating, and her face says her body knows what's happening. Those swimmers are homing in on that egg, and yeah, her mind may not have realized it consciously, but her body knows one of those little swimmers has found that egg, drilled in, and once that egg implants, she's gonna be breeding, 'n fuck, I'm gonna start working on knocking Penny up again after Fiona Lee starts swelling up. I lie back, one arm under Fiona's shoulders, just kinda holding her, the way you hold a bitch after you fucked her good, and she's serviced your cock, and sucked your balls dry.
"Happy Valentine's Day, Fiona," I murmur again, coz it's sorta romantic that I popped her on Valentine's Day, just like I popped Penny, 'n I kiss her cheek, but she's already fast asleep, her ass up in the air, one hand cupping her pussy, and the lucky little bitch is exhausted, and I kinda smile as I close my eyes, coz fuck, it'd be fucking perfect if I've knocked the bitch up.
Still, said I was gonna pick Fiona Lee up outside 'a High School at lunch time 'n take her to the medical clinic. Yeah, well, I'm gonna pick her up alright. Pick her up 'n fuck taking her to the clinic. I'm gonna bone the bitch on the back seat of the old F250, 'n fuck, I'm fuckin' near ready to bone her again just thinking about it, 'n I smile.
Kinda looking forward now to knocking Penny up again too, 'n I'll fuck them both again in the morning, 'n make sure that Fiona's the one that gets the swimmers. Gotta make sure, 'n hey, I'm a working stiff. Never minded a bit of sweat, 'n I kinda grin, thinking about working hard, n fuck, my cock twitches but I better let the bitches get some sleep.
Penny and Fiona.
Hot little Korean Valentine's Day virgins, both of them, 'n fuck, I'm smiling as I drift off to sleep myself, coz I fuckin' love Valentine's Day.
Well, hope you fuckin' enjoyed my little tale of Valentine's Day love and romance, dear reader. Nothing like boning a hot little Korean bitch on Valentine's Day, 'n every other fuckin' day, 'n that was a lotta fuckin' fun to write. And hey, written for the Literotica 2020 Valentine's Day competition, so if you liked it, gimme a fuckin' vote, hey. Comments welcome, even from fuckin' assholes who got their balls twisyed in a knot over a bit of rough sex, so hey, fuckin' go for it.
And, less in character and more moi, I did win the Literotica 2019 Winter Holidays Competition, so I'm not eligible to even place in this one, so don't waste your time trying to knock me out or vote me up. Just rate me with whatever you think this deserves. I ain't eligible to place in the competition, dudes and dudettes, and I wrote this one purely for kicks and giggles, so just enjoy it with my best wishes, and I hope you did enjoy.
And how did I do as a guy, guys? ..... Chloe
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 1 year ago1star
how come any of your stories win valentines award ?
none of your stories have to do anything remotely related to love or respect from a white man for his asian beloved
all your stories are just brainless self hating asian chicks being humiliated and degraded by big cock white guys
makes me feel like u are some old retired pervert white dude writing some degrading racist fap porn pretending to be an innocent asian lady
and i am saying this as a proud white man with a loving devoted korean wife and one hapa son
i have huge respect for my wife and in laws and their beautiful culture which supported me through my worst
i cant find a single story of urs where u havent insulted asian women so i never enjoyed any of ur stories
even mild raceplay stories like these enables white worshipping / yellow fever and thus enables racial prostitution and thus defeat the entire purpose of interracial marriage and love
ChloeTzangover 1 year agoAuthorLOL. Tom's American macho guy all the way thru. I've read about Aussie bogan's and they're very much the same in some ways, bar the accent and the slang. And yeah, he was meant in part to be a bit of a caricature. This was written for a Valentine's Day competition and I entered it in NonCon (a guaranteed way NOT to win a competition LOL) and like White Wedding, it was meant to push a few buttons. I sort of took half a dozen guys like Tom I knew in real life (yeah, they do exist, you just gotta move in the right social circles LOL - I am a bit eclectic with my friends) and merged them together, and he was meant to be obnoxious and unlikeable - but also very real in his own beliefs and attitudes - the sorta guy that would beat up dudes causing trouble in his girlfriend's dad's store simply because she was his girlfriend and family's family and you look after family come hell or high water. He has his own moral code and he sticks to it. As for Penny, she's one of those girls that falls for a guy hard, and sees the gold underneath the exterior - Tom really loves her, he cares, and he likes a good hard fuck - and Penny likes that too - but she's a secondary character to Tom, and its Tom's POV so you see everything thru his eyes.
oldhornywriterover 1 year agoOkay, just 2/19 of the way through it and I have to give it a rest while returning to what passes for the real world. To quote another troglodyte asshole "I'll be back," to finish reading the story and probably to make more comments at the end.
For now.
1) Great writing and great imagination.
2) I'm amazed at the number of people who don't realize that Tom is a caricature of the modern American macho narcissist. That said, I think one of the comments said something about one in 8 billion. I fear there are a lot more than that like him.
3) That makes sense to me. I can see a female author writing her first male POV opting for an over the top caricature. Think of the paintings produced by caricature artists all over the world vs. portrait art of the great masters. The prototypical male chauvinist pig on steroids has got to be easier to write than Gatsby.
4) A lot of the reviews seem to react to Tom being an obnoxious, unlikable asshole. Yeah, true -- but credit has to be given for him being a well-drawn obnoxious, etc. He's not someone I'd be comfortable being around (and I've been around some weaker echoes of Tom), or even watching. But he is (in his overblown way), a coherent, believable character. You don't have to approve of the product to admire the technical prowess that produced it.
5) Still working on the idea of Kim, the super bright submissive Korean. Being neither Asian, female, nor submissive, I'm trying to figure out if she's as much a caricature as Tom. While there is plenty of room for exploiting racial stereotyping here, my gut says she isn't, since she would be easier to write for this author, and hence does not require the exaggerated detail.. (It may be that Kim turns out to be simply part of the background here -- certainly she seems to be from Tom's POV. If so, too bad for me.)
Bottom line: very much enjoying the originality of this story -- interested to see where it goes. And also now interested to see some of your female POV stories.
Anonymousalmost 3 years agoDid you grow up in Australia? Because Tom reads and talks like a bad photocopy of a bogan’s second favourite wet dream (ranked after a Holden comeback producing sick V16 Commodores).
Try talking to some real guys about how they feel and think - premise was interesting, but really needed more editing and less rapey-ness.
Dr53almost 4 years agoThis is very erotic but it's not literature...one of my least favorite by Chloe. Check out her long short story about old Shanghai, written well, very interesting, and erotic too!
