All Comments on 'Vampire's Lust'

on your first story to Lit. I think you show promise as an author. Your story seemed original in it's content and I would enjoy reading more of your works. I only saw a few mistakes and having an editor or even a friend proof read might help. Having said that I must also tell you that I would rather read a good story w/a few errors than read a really bad story that is perfectly written.

Again congrats on your first submission and good luck w/all your future storys.

I really liked it. If there were any errors, I didn't pay attention to them xD You can really tell the main characters character when he puts his servant back in her place after the sex.

Your story was good, but in the future you should really proof read your work, because there were so many errors that at times it made the story difficult to read. Your other option would be to seek out an editor to proof your work before you post it. The quality of your work will only improve by doing one or both of these things.