All Comments on 'Veronica's Spring Break'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Hot!

Interesting concept. They're all friends and so they share. Then you acknowledged reality that it would inevitably change. I liked that.

I have one complaint. The word is shudder.

A shutter is on a window or in a film camera.

R.

rawallacerawallaceover 3 years agoAuthor
Wrong Word

Thanks for pointing out the error. Of course this is something that spellcheck would not catch and after several drafts and reads I didn't catch it myself even though I know the difference.

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