by Avicia
Dear Avicia…this is an absolutely mesmerising story… I truly love it…I identify with the characters, as you bring them to life. I recognise and love your critical stance to aspects of the category and am thirsty of the heroism and good endings…I don’t see Diana as a dark character and hope she will be safe….
Another great chapter. It appears that Roccio and Alan are headed towards a happily ever after ending but I wonder how Diana will react. She still owns Roccio and so far has refused to turn over title to Alan. And then there is the Diana/Dani relationship. So many interesting characters for the reader to identify with.
Wonderful continuation of this marvelous story. Really looking forward to reading about the further courtship of Roccio.
This story is so fun and great entertainment. Excellent story telling with characters that bring the story to life. IT ROCKS. It has so much detail and keep the reader engaged waiting for the next event. Well Done. Thanks for your time to published. Keep it rolling on and keep the fun pouring in. Cheers