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- COMMENTS
Anonymousalmost 2 years agoWay too long, too much extra nonsense.
I skimmed it to get to the good parts.
Page 4 was my favorite.
Good flow when you actually got to the good stuff.
2soon2noalmost 2 years agoThis is a great read. Well laid out and believable from start to... well two hands really sttrrettchched it for me! Funny though 'in the end'.
The comments only highlight how flawed the point system is. People that don't like certain genres should not read them, but that's their business I suppose. Yet, when we let them judge our work, we are letting their inhibitions mark us in the rating system.
I gave it the 5 that it deserved for top writing, top imagination, top believe-ability, story structure, character building, detailed descriptions.
Now that is just my critical opinion.
johsunabout 5 years agoAnother good one, this author has his own genre, weird and super disgusting kink, but so so so funny.
Actually a good read the kept me at it until the end.
5*
Anonymousover 8 years agoApparently you wish to insult and frustrate your readers too.
