All Comments on 'Viv's Turn Pt. 01'

Glad you are looking at Showcase, if you will, from Viv’s POV — after all, she operates the camera so POV takes on added meaning. Very erotic as we see her as an enthusiastic voyeur but also as she turns the camera on herself literally and reflectively. Loved the closing of this chapter: the intensely passionate sex scene (just as hot if not more so than the same scene from Ch 5) and Viv’s inner dialogue about her exploration/journey. More than tangential; looking forward to where you take Viv/us.

Migbird: Thank you. I think it was toesucker1 who suggested doing something from Viv's POV, so I thought: why not the whole story? There's plenty of scope with her and Sonia.

Lissy

OMG - this was so good. I liked Viv in the prior series and really like the new window into her evolving feelings. And reliving that camera shoot through Viv's eyes? So erotic. Yes, I did suggest the new POV and I'm so glad it got you thinking. "... another triumph of sizzling erotica".

toesucker1: Thanks, and thanks for the suggestion. I'm enjoying revisiting it from a different perspective.

Lissy

Wow, what a story. It was so, very erotic, hot and sexy!

For me, Viv was the most interesting character from the Shona series and it good to see her version of events. Her questioning of her own sexuality, after videoing Shona and Aly, through to her starting to changing her looks was well written. In fact, the whole story was well written, which made it such a good read!! Easy 5 stars 🌟

CupidCupid: Thank you. I had't really considered Viv a main character until the Shona series developed, but she's definitely worth her own story.

Lissy

This was really good. Often when a write looks at the same story from another POV, it can be a little repetitive, but you managed to keep this fresh. Kudos.

johnco54: Thanks. That was one of the things I was aiming for.

Very well written and fully deserving 5*

UncertainT: Thank you!

fantastic ,had me on the edge of my seat feeling so horny ,Thank you