by LissyW
So deliciously hot with these three together. Good thing that the shower is so big! Oh, and I sure enjoyed Vix's sexy dream about Lindi. ;-) Perhaps that means we will see more of her in the future?
Vix sure is one lucky woman, and it's nice that she knows it.
So much to like about this piece/chapter: you handle the array of characters, major and minor, and interactions/relations so well/so creative, a trademark. Your/Vicki’s reflection on “whole women being together thing” and their sexuality so well done whether her own thoughts or through dialogue. Any number of creative phrasing; I love “… hot wanting women…” As a near hopeless romantic, you could easily have ended the piece after the two paragraphs beginning: “In the wee hours of the morning … “ - so blissfully romantic laying in bed with Roo, but glad you closed the way you did — better for where you are taking Vicki (and hopefully Roo).
Migbird: Thank you. I did nearly end it after those two paragraphs! I had other things I wanted to include though, like the shower scene...
This story is so erotic, sensitive and briiliantly written. Defo five stars! 🌟