All Comments on 'Wake Up Lisa Mitchell Ch. 03-04'

I'll wait to score this one as I'm not sure where it's heading yet.

Solid chapters so far

Now there are two possibilities: 1. he becomes her pimp and pimps her out or 2. he becomes her cuckold and is happy when she fucks other men! Both possibilities are, as always, pathetic stories. But you know that best yourself, right?

You never explained what the whole "altercation" was all about in the bar. Why was a middle aged man fighting? Then the whole situation in the taxi cab was just childish. As if someone aged in their mid-late 40's would do such a stupid thing in public.

Yes, fantasy rules the day but you have to keep them realistic. Cheers.