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Click here- Upon the resignation of Charles Grant from VBS, Lisa Mitchell will, in good faith, continue to communicate and partner in the growth of Charles Grant and Eric Jackson's business opportunity at will.
- No sexual requirements are a part of this contract unless approved by Lisa Mitchell.
- Practice discreteness of the agreement and do not mention this document with any outside parties.
Section III: Signatures
Signatures from both parties provide acknowledgment of the agreement.
_______________ Lisa Mitchell
_______________ Charles Grant
End of Agreement
Once they were done editing the agreement, Lisa could feel a renewed energy and excitement about working at VBS.
Meanwhile, Charles Grant wondered something which was an honest question, "If you divorce, will you change your last name?"
Lisa looked to her left then upward in thought before staring at Mr. Grant with a glow in her blue eyes, "I just may..."
- COMMENTS
Ambul4 months agoJamesVI. I hope you do not go to the end and then rely on flashbacks to fill in the story. That would lose all the suspense and drama that you have created so far. One the things I really like is following Lisa’s journey as she might, without knowing what will happen next.
Ambul4 months agoI hope that Lisa will be modeling lingerie, Perhaps even very sexy lingerie, such as open-cup bras, crotcheless panties,etc. With her fabulous body, beautiful face, and 34F tits, she would sell a lot of lingerie. I would expect that she would become very wet and aroused from the experience. Is her daughter interested in glamour modeling or modeling lingerie?
Justincase14 months agoThanks for your reply JamesVI! I would like you to continue to write her journey, not with flashbacks and reflection. One thing that I feel is a lost opportunity are the hispanic gardeners. I think
They should make a come back or make some kind of closure to that story line.
I really liked how they secretly watched and observed her life, beauty and behaviour with her being completely oblivious of any of that.
Ambul4 months agoJamesVi, thank you so much for you update. You have written a wonderfully engaging and erotic story, with great characters. I think the main characters, as you have developed them, do provide a solid basis for storylines that could diverge, or converge. I do like limited flashbacks that illuminate key events or aspects of a character’s motives and thoughts. For example, I have mentioned on several occasions in comments that I thought the reason Lisa got her breasts enhanced to a very large 34F cup - truly pornstar - proportions, could not be entirely because Ryan wanted them. Lisa’s character is too strong, too smart, and it seems that she was the dominant partner in their marriage, especially given her husband’s instability and sexual inadequacy. I had speculated that she had her own reasons for agreeing to very large enhancements, and I suggested that she had exhibitionist desires that she kept well hidden. Her behavior with Mark and with Charles seem to confirm that she is ready to “break out” if given an opportunity. There is great flashback potential here. In her banking job, Lisa seemed at times to be oblivious to the fact that her pencil skirts, fitted blouses, and Louboutin stiletto heels, while professional, did focus attention on her fabulous and very busty body. But was she as oblivious as we have been led to believe? Again, her motives are unknown. She certainly wanted to look good, and her running demonstrated that she wanted to stay fit and trim. There is more to Lisa Mitchell than what we know from the events in the story so far. All in all, it seems to be that Lisa “conservative nature” has concealed a stunningly beautiful 43-year old woman with a face and body that any glamour model, stripper, or pornstar would envy.
Ryan’s sexual inadequacies, I have suggested, may also have led to feel intimidated by his gorgeous wife, and so focused his attention on their also beautiful 18-year old daughter. This is a storyline that seems quite separate from Lisa’s awakening. It is a subplot and could easily remain that way once Lisa divorces Ryan and finds her own place. But anything could happen and it could play a role. I confess to some interest in the adult daughter and what her future could hold and how might intersect with her mom’s. What if she too became a glamour model? This is an incredible story and you have created an amazing and very sexy main character in Lisa. I look forward to coming chapters.
JamesVI4 months agoAuthorThank you for the support. I’ve been framing the next chapter. Written and re-written a few times as it didn’t go along with progression. I will be writing up the alternate soon to see how that feels. Over the course of the story at times I’ve rushed my chapters. This next one is going to take us through the next phase of Lisa’s journey but also get the plot cleaned up for many characters. I don’t want to keep introducing individuals and leave them out of the saga in a forgetful way.
A thought I was also playing with was whether to fast forward to the end and go with either reflection/flashback scenes versus the journey.
Thank you for your patience and understanding as I navigate through my thoughts.
