All Comments on 'Wake Up, Sleepyhead'

That's it?

It's the beginning of thousand Lit stories condensed into 750 words. Why, you want a sequel?

Really lame, you could have kept going and wrote at least another page. There better be another chapter because this started out so good. I would have gave you 5* if it was a little longer.

Be careful what you wish for.

But seriously, getting the mood right is everything, and this one is kinda fun.

Great execution, premise and a whole lot of kink smashed into 750 words! Well done!

A rushed rip off of so many other stories.

Um, yes. Exactly.

That was a quick shot in literary form

I like the story. I hope you will keep the story going. It has an interesting premise and could progress using the same compressed format.

First of all you stole the idea for this from another person so shake on you for that. Second your story was too short and quite frankly sucked

Very good stuff!

Great short story, but they should have fucked. 4 stars

Shake on me? Hmm!

I wasn't stealing any one author's idea. I must have read dozens of stories on Lit where a young man inherits a magic ring and ends up in an incestuous fantasy. I've written variations on the theme myself.

I'm not claiming originality of the concept, but I certainly didn't actively copy.

Really nice premise for a story but it's just too darn short and rushed for my taste.