All Comments on 'Waking up at the Crack of Dawn'

The first problem is that you're in the wrong category. When you start talking about transvestites, it's not a problem IF you were in the Transgender and Crossdressers category. But being as you're in the Loving Wives category I will simply say you're a complete moron for not understanding the difference. The second problem is that your writing is simply horrible. While I realize this isn't a site for professional writers, you should be able to submit something this isn't written at the level of a 6th grader. You could sink the USS Enterprise with the mistakes in this mess. Please submit future works in the correct category and PLEASE find an editor or at least do a much better job proof reading. This was simply awful, start to finish.

1 star only because negative stars aren't yet available.

Whorewife cheating with a Tranny, a new low even for 2020 LW.

Going to make all the scandal sheets in England!!!

Doesn't deserve any comment! Not even a negative or useless comment. 1*

Just from the first paragraph:

"Hello, here is my story. If you do not like cheating wife storied please do not read this. Please only write, positive, constructive feedback. I ignore negative or useless comments and suggestions by readers."

First of all, this is Loving Wives, it's all about cheating WIVES (not "wife"), so there SHOULDN'T be anyone that doesn't like "cheating wives stories (not "storied"). If you don't want negative comments, turn them off. You'll learn FAR more from negative comments than from positive ones.

Just a couple more things before I have to bail:

Please use past tense, not present tense.

If it's not the name of the shop, you don't need capitalization, just say, "a designer men's clothes shop." Since twenty years IS a long time, just say, "I had worked there for nearly twenty years."

So in effect she was raped!

You are an arrogant, complacent, useless person who dares to tell readers what they have to comment on and how! Learn and then get back in touch!

Was not aware only men can get Korina after pill. She was raped. No consent was given. She thought it was a man.

Dawn fired her/his sperm up into

His. Women do not have sperm.

Constructive feedback can be positive or negative. Your statement indicates that all you want is praise.

Dear God please make it stop.

One of the best stories on Literotica.

This could have been written far better but I love the premise