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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Quite the little Peyton Place

It's certainly not the author's fault that I haven't read previous chapters. That said, I felt like I needed a score card to try to keep straight which players were cheating and who was caring. Aside from that it was good fun.

I guess I'll go back and read the start to decide whether to try to catch up.

NVDiceGuyNVDiceGuyabout 3 years ago

Finally a decent chapter. This had been a mess prior. Some redeeming qualities now

Legio_Patria_NostraLegio_Patria_Nostraalmost 3 years ago

Very well-written. Down the middle and away from the BS extremes. I'm glad Steve didn't 'fess up, since Mary lies when it's convenient. He needs to grab Jen and run away with her.

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