All Comments on 'Was I Becoming a Slut? Pt. 01'
by Louiseawakes
- 26 Comments
AliceGee8 months agoA very well written first submission. I am already looking forward to Part 2. A well deserved five stars from me. Well done.
SomaSlave8 months agoHave you written before? This is a marvelously well written, arousing, erotic tale. I won't ask if it's based on what you've experienced or what you wish to experience, as all that matters is the authenticity. Two lines, in particular, caught my eye::
-- It had been an age since any man had 'eaten me.' This wasn't like any man.
-- "Yes," I replied, almost ashamed.
Keep up the good work.
Brava!
lexdw328 months agoI once had a friend like Debbie. 🙂 A well written story that brought back fond memories… thanks!
Petedesire19667 months agoThis is a great story and the writing is terrific. I felt carried along by the story and the sexual build up is very erotic. The story is written in such a way as to bring out really well the emotional journey Louise is on. Can't wait to read more.
JeremySplash7 months agoThank you so much for sharing this wonderful story. Very beautifully written. Amazing for a first time. Can't wait to read more.
kennyboy827 months agoOnly discovered your work today (29 Oct) and was highly impressed by it. It's definitely got me keen to continue reading to see exactly where this takes us. Well written, believable too. It earned 5 Stars from me.
Anonymous6 months agoThank you for the wonderful story. Neighbors should be there for each other. I am about to read the rest of the series now, who knows what will become of me if I can reach the end? Thank you once more.
Mariners_UK6 months agoThank you for a well written story. Very good and enjoyed reading it. Looking forward to reading the following stories. :-)
Wiz10026 months agoThe great start to what could be a fabulous series - it’s certainly got me hooked for more.
Whether this is fiction or based on real-life events is irrelevant, your description of this woman who has not had any sex for what seems like some time (other than self-pleasure) was arousing, descriptive and well told. The fact it was with her female neighbour just raised the level of thrill and excitement to another level.
I’ll be reading the rest of the instalments but can see much potential about where this may go - the title gives that much away!! Continued lesbian sex with Debbie, joining Debbie and hubby in a wild threesome , attending the swingers club where single females will be made most welcome, I’m sure, or just going to the bars in town to get picked up by the young guys “out on the pull”! Lots of sexy opportunities
LadiesAreFirst5 months agoAmazed, I am guessing you have some writing experience somewhere in your background. The details, THAT is what separates a story from a great story. This is a great first story.
I, do not enjoy the wham, bam, thank you mam story nearly as much as the slow build-up. Building the arousal, the anticipation, the believability.
Nothing ruins a story faster than reading a story and the event is physically impossible.
P L E A S E keep up the great work. You just acquired a new follower.
CupidCupid5 months agoIf this is your first submission then well done and look forward to the forthcoming chapters!!
Aoife_from_Ulster5 months agoTremendous way to start a series. I cannot wait to continue it. I am thrilled to have found it.
I love how Debbie is working Louise. The first kiss in the restaurant, near perfection. The little addition of how she could taste her lipstick on her lips, Devine. You put me right there with them. Sexy!
Love the close of the chapter, Debbie putting her at ease, leaving the door open for more. 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟
honeybee863 months agoThis is so raw and yummy. I ached by the end of the story. Powerful writing. Breathless thanks x
LastStandingDame2 months agoThe description of that first kiss and how Louise’s defenses crumble in the apartment…..divine.
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