by Louiseawakes
Good story, I can see why the category can be tough to determine. But because Ben is the main focus here I think mature is good. Your bio with the linked picture was as exciting as the story.
Great stories, good tension and, yes, clearly crossing themes which seems natural. Thank you and hope you keep writing
Great plot, great style of writing. I like the mix of different events in the same story
Wow, what a great part 3. I love the way your stories are combining the different awakenings of Louise's sexuality and her desire which keeps growing. From the lovely seduction by Debbie and Marko to the deepening encounter with Ben, the writing is pacy, erotic, and brings all your characters alive and off the page. Very arousing. Hope there is more to cum :)
I love your writing but the plot in this one was all wrong and unnecessary, so did not enjoy this chapter at all. What is Louise doing wanting to “teach” an inexperienced virgin who had previously raped her (yes, I consider the first time to be rape), how to have sex with a woman?! How can she look her son in the eye after she’s done this and have a normal relationship with him??
5* for the writing but minus 3* for the plot.
So, if a man persists in his rape, she will learn to enjoy it and give him an educational fuck the next day. Are all women like this?