All Comments on 'Watching Different Shows'

by RedWillow

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staceyshackletonstaceyshackletonabout 9 years ago
Short, but thoroughly enjoyable

You have a very nice rhythm to this story, and even though it was short, this matched the furtive nature of the act nicely.

You also had an excellent descriptive power to the girlfriend's reactions.

Looking forward to reading more stories from you.

Have fun with your future writing!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

Great one

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