All Comments on 'Watching My Wife Become Janes Bitch'

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teddy66teddy667 months ago

Loved The story. I love hearing Jane making Ann her little bitch. Hope you write more. Love to see what happens next even seeing Jane making Ann husband her little bitch too.

LL180LL1807 months ago

Fantastic story 5 stars for you.Keep the good work on.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

loved it! i hope they get other wives in neighborhood to join them.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

A way above average story of lesbian seduction and domination. It might have been a bit more contemporary if the husband had planted a spy camera and watched remotely. Hopefully things will get more torrid between Jane and Anne. How about involving some of the neighbouring wives?

PappasleazePappasleaze7 months ago

Didn't see where she made Ann her bitch, I see some great sex, i see a little daring going on and even a LITTLE dom action. with Ann calling her a bitch and telling her what to do and all seems as though it was just a mutual sexual experience. with that said it was very hot. I was hoping he would get caught in the closet, maybe next Wednesday. 4/5 stars. You said the end hopefully that was for this chapter and you will write a part 2. if you will please let us know. your writing was great. Thank you for sharing

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Pappasleaze - bitch please - calling someone a bitch and that person responding in a submissive way makes them a bitch.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Please. Don't make this a threesome or introduce the husband to their sex time shenanigans

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

would like to see her getting fucked in the ass and more risky outfits and public exposure

MurseDMurseD7 months ago

Excellent story, hope there’re more chapters to come.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Awesome story, can’t wait for the second part!

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Amazing! Any idea when pt 2 will be?

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

I'd love a story about how the wife was originally seduced the first week.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Hope there is a part 2 soon

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Good, can't help thinking hubby is fighting a losing battle, will probably end up dumped and divorced, or living as second best in his own marriage.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Is there a part 2 cumming?

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Been writing on and off years but never erotica. I have enjoyed sex all my life including some taboo but always with a wiling partner. Recently experimented with crossdressing and its a new experience that I enjoy while I'm learning. Doesn't compare to nailing a 20 year old's ...