All Comments on 'What Happens in the Office...'

by TasteofEden

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AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

Nice premise.

But sex all too rushed.

He's not interested in her tits? Why?

He doesn't play with her ass. Or her asshole.

He doesn't make her take his cock out and play with it. Or lick it. Or suck it.

Three stars.

Tyrol_QueedTyrol_Queed2 months ago

Very descriptive and arousing. I loved the inner questioning monologue. Please write more. (4/5)

EllySingEllySing2 months ago

Nicely done - good setting for many more potential stories here. Sadly way too familiar with HR regulations to believe *any* of this "banter" would have been acceptable, but happy to suspend disbelief ;)

gemmaXOgemmaXO2 months ago

Ugh more more more this is amazing

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

Brilliant.

PeachesdPeachesd2 months ago

Please continue the story!!! It was amazing and I was holding on to every word!

epezriderepezrider2 months ago

It's a shame her cubicle was hidden from cameras. Anyone viewing her could have used the video for blackmail and enjoyed her, as well. At the very least, someone should have come back to the office to see her in action.

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