All Comments on 'What I Think of You Pt. 02'

Really excited to see more of this! Premise is very interesting and your writing is very good! Makes me wish there was more already but quality work takes time so I’ll happily wait! Interested to see if Alex’s powers can impact reality or just the perceptions of the one person?

Good story so far, though you missed an opportunity to have Alice lead Rachel around the house by a leash, and have Rachel throw her own photos out or witness Alice do it. Also maybe it would be good to have Rachel kill her own family members so as to fully sever her ties to anything other than master.

I'm not big on bimbos though as I prefer women with brains who work hard for their master and protect them. Why should he work hard when his slaves can do it for him? Also a slave should be protective of her master, fully willing to kill and die for her master.

Anyhoo... keep up the good work.

Thank you everyone who's left a review or a comment on my story, I really do appreciate it. Part 3 has been written and is pending review. Thank you to anyone who sent me their thoughts or suggestions, I do appreciate knowing what you thought of my work for good or bad, and if you've just been thinking of writing a comment, I would appreciate it if you did, even if it's just to say. "wayyy too many typo's."