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Click hereFinally, she looked at a photo taken last year that she had framed, it was of the whole study group, laughing, smiling, she looks at herself, formerly Rachel, presently fuckhole, fully clothed, looking longingly at Alex.
What a fucking disgrace, Fuckhole internally screamed, every single one of those bitches went about saying their name, acting as if the fact they were had never so much as offered themselves body and soul to Alex was acceptable, respectable even. She fixated on the shirt she was wearing; how could Alex ever love someone so selfish, in the years of longing, she had never even once offered him her tits, offered him everything she was, everything she had, everything she could become, if only he willed it.
Speaking of which, Rachel was rich, Fuckhole knew Alex had far more right to her possessions than she did, her body included, and later today, she would make it right.
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JovialImplications6 months agoAuthorThank you everyone who's left a review or a comment on my story, I really do appreciate it. Part 3 has been written and is pending review. Thank you to anyone who sent me their thoughts or suggestions, I do appreciate knowing what you thought of my work for good or bad, and if you've just been thinking of writing a comment, I would appreciate it if you did, even if it's just to say. "wayyy too many typo's."
Greasy_Ballsack6 months agoGood story so far, though you missed an opportunity to have Alice lead Rachel around the house by a leash, and have Rachel throw her own photos out or witness Alice do it. Also maybe it would be good to have Rachel kill her own family members so as to fully sever her ties to anything other than master.
I'm not big on bimbos though as I prefer women with brains who work hard for their master and protect them. Why should he work hard when his slaves can do it for him? Also a slave should be protective of her master, fully willing to kill and die for her master.
Anyhoo... keep up the good work.
Anonymous6 months agoReally excited to see more of this! Premise is very interesting and your writing is very good! Makes me wish there was more already but quality work takes time so I’ll happily wait! Interested to see if Alex’s powers can impact reality or just the perceptions of the one person?
