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All Comments on 'When The Tables Turn'

by StephenIreland

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Master_DoctorMaster_Doctor4 months ago

good start, but way to short. You want your reader to start to get into the story. They tend to ger disinterested if there isnt more than maybe a tease.

RLA2023RLA20234 months ago

Great story keep going

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Way to short

Write 2nd part asap

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