All Comments on 'While There Is Hope Ch. 07'

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Freddog6601 about 1 month ago

Reading more than snippets would make this a lot better story.

Anonymousabout 1 month ago

I just stumbled on this. I hate I missed so much, but I am caught up now.

Just wow! A whodunit thriller with hot sex. An unbeatable combo. And while I always look forward to sex in a story, I must confess I'm more interested at the moment in who did what. You mean to tell me the witness was actually in bed, so to speak, with the guy they were protecting her from? This is good stuff. Have you ever seen Queen of the South? This is in a similar vein. You could shop TV/movie rights to this story. Well done! 5/5 stars.

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A person who thought they could get away with it. I read that some people communicate with followers by updating their bio. So I’m going to try. Chapter 6 of While There Is Hope comes out tomorrow. I hope (that’s funny) that you are enjoying the story. I just wanted to say th...

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