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All Comments on 'Whispers in the Vineyard Ch. 05'

by Daddysgirlfl

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raraewriterraraewriterabout 2 years ago

Exquisitely done as usual. Inspired. Bravo.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Very hot.loved it

HottieOlwenHottieOlwenabout 2 years ago

I like the way you've introduced new characters and woven them into the story of previous chapters. I have one tiny criticism. As a non-American, I find your use ofyour use of 'dove' as the past tense of the verb 'to dive' irritating. I would prefer 'dived'. Just a small point, not sufficiently bad to prevent 5 stars for this chapter.

chytownchytownabout 2 years ago

****Very entertaining start. Thanks for sharing.

HottieOlwenHottieOlwenabout 2 years ago

What an idiot I am! I posted a comment earlier without proof reading it first. Apologies! That'll teach me to nit pick about dove/dived!

orbnatsorbnatsabout 2 years ago

Your writing gets better with each new story. I have been following you from your first submission and you are my new favorite author. I look forward to the next chapter.

P.S. I missed you during your break from posting here. Really glad you are back.

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