All Comments on 'The Beverly Chronicles Ch. 04 - Who Decided This Was a Good Idea?'

WTF is this? Skimmed to the end, terrible

When you write a multi-part story it helps when they share a title.

What a master class piece of bullshite

Just another stupid black/white cheating story. Shit like this makes stupid look good.

Skimming is a wonderful thing. I read the Dan/Marcus introduction and buzzed to the end. I only imagine the crap that was spewed in between. No, wait, I don't want to think about how bad it could be.

It's bad enough you fill your stories with BBC mythology and lies, but then to expect your readers to navigate through a series of interconnected stories, but with unconnected titles, too? Fuck right on off.

Every story posted today was garbage. At this rate, I'm going to wear out the number 1 key on my keyboard. 1*

Is this author really so stupid he posted this?

I think I understand the effort, but it was completely fucked up in execution. Glad you and your fans like it. Thanks for the effort.

Pathetic.1*

Simply stupid. Gave a fuck about the crap. Talent free wannabe scribbler by numbers. Geez

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WHO DECIDED THIS WAS A GOOD IDEA?

Seems you did, though the rest of us could have told you this trash wasn't worth wiping our collective asses with.

Loved it. Not a straight forward wife loses her mind to slutdom tale but plenty of good sex. I think you could have gone further with the jealousy and hurt especially when the wife went hog wild having two weekends full of sex with two other people. But I do appreciate that some was there at all. And none of that chest beating bravado BS. Love and a relationship can be more complicated than “one and done” or “live with the humiliation, Cuck!” I especially enjoyed the consensual, “let’s go wild together” happy ending.

I want to hear what happens when the teens come home for break!!! Do they bring friends?

This is the kind of story that brought me here in the first place. Thank you!

Marcus again? Jamal must be in jail this week.

I agree with 26thNC... Jamal must be on vacation or still in jail. Just an overall sad pathetic story. 1 star and that is generous.

Great story. Who wouldn’t want to fuck a sexy little 19 year old? Oh, that’s right, 26thNC/iammweasel wouldn’t. Why you ask? Several reasons. First, he’s more into black guys than white girls. He was probably jealous of Beverly getting that black cock. Second, his old shriveled up pecker really doesn’t get hard any longer, so the mere thought of him fucking anything is laughable.