by ReleaseIsAPrivilege
Absolutely amazing chapter. Though a little surprised Amanda didn't at least use Fiona to get off at any point during the session. Look forward to more
Until this chapter, history has been the perfect mix of consent and reluctance for me. But type in the safe word, it messed up. I understand why you need a safe word in reality - people are not perfect, what can go wrong, etc. But this is a story that you have complete control over. And the past chapters make it clear to us that Fiona definitely wants this. And this detail destroys the ideal fantasy of losing control.
Don't get me wrong, the story is still good and I'll be watching for updates. But in my head I will pretend that there is no stop word. And I am sure that the further development of the plot will not destroy this dream in any way. In most stories, the safe word is introduced to never be remembered later.