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AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Good story, but you need to reread it for typos - there were a lot of them. I reread my stories 4-5 times before submitting. Lit also has a section for contacting someone to edit your story.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Wow 😳💕 stunning 😍 beautiful to read 💖

AsgarthAsgarth6 months ago

Do the math son, 18 married 15 Wrong category. no incest

WOWSWOWS6 months agoAuthor

Anonymous, thank you for the feedback and spot on. In fact the non edited version was uploaded, ugh.

Softncurvy1....more to come, loooootttttssss more

DivaDyfiDivaDyfi6 months ago

While your writing is a disaster the story has some potential.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Wish you shopped where I do. Watching you would be so much fun.

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Pasion for writing on the edge. Love to explore topics that others may not always think about. All in good clean fun and in the spirit of masturbation. New at this, working hard to always to do better.

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