All Comments on 'Whore House Ch. 01'

I'm sorry, this just feels... empty.

Interesting start - might want more detail? will be interesting to see what happens when someone who hasn't been there before enters, and also who this blonde girl thinks she is the moment she leaves: this has established he can give post-hypnotic commands. maybe also have him find out WTF is going on and how this works? ;)

Let's see how this progresses. So far it's good...

That was wild and out of control, and I like what you propose for future installments.

I like were your head's iat , I look forward to more chapters ,

I wouldn’t need to be hypnotized to pleasure a man!❤️

You're back! I've been going you'll continue your Paradise series, but this be story already feels fun. I hope you'll give the girls names, of course. It'll make things much easier to follow, and they can be slutty names, too~ "Fuck Puppet, Cum Slut, Cock Sleeve"

I agree with Verensei it’s an interesting start but it needs more details, is the control an area effect? Does it wear off after they leave, what will this and others remember?

Thx

Tess (uk)