All Comments on 'Wife's First Time'

Wierd…

What is "faze"? Or do you mean "phase"? Otherwise a good first start.

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WTF? Another new cuck writer. Hasn't this site got enough cuck writers? If a wife hasn't cum from a 7.5 inch dick something is very wrong. But instead of talking about the husband wants to become a cuck and the wife gets off on thinking sbout Cucking the husband. How sad for the writer.

Poor.

At least it was with hubby’s dick 😎

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More first story foolishness, as though their version of perversion is the one everyone will like. Put this trash in fetish.

Another cucky boy, odoreater will love it.

Where is the rest of the story?

Cool, I love it when a wife wakes up to the hotness of enjoying her sexuality.

I wonder what it would be like if a writer used words like FAZE, PHASE, WANDER and WONDER in their proper context? I wonder what it would be like to have cuckold stories in the proper category for their genre? I wonder if anyone else sees the deficiencies in this story? I wonder if others see the obvious overuse of a weak marriage relationship and a perverted husband's desire to whore out his wife for his deviant pleasures? Halloween is over, you didn't need to wear your Author costume. Here is a ☆ for your participation.

OK but you badly need an editor. "Faze"/"Phase", "Wander/"Wonder, changes between present and past tenses and complete misuse of dialog quotation marks made this difficult to read. I assume that there will be a part two. If so this should have been labeled as Part 1. That being said I'm interested in seeing where this goes.

Interesting story if he is opening her mind to shared fantasies only. If he wants her to be with other men then stop writing now.

If faze vs phase was the only issue I'd have been happy, but your story was rife with errors. All the distractions make it difficult for a reader to stay focused on any eroticism. Please continue to write, but please find an editor.

Going to go all the way gay arent you!

Reads just like another writer here. Retreads like you get tiring for us normal folks.

Boy has visions of being a cuck.

waiting for the finish of this story

First story!

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My husband inviting me to watch porn with him turned our sex life into passionate, adventuresome eroticism I had never known before. Keep writing!

Fazed and confused.