All Comments on 'Wild Desires and Secret Needs Ch. 03'

by Odins_Fire

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Fascinating but not much of a turn which surprised me. In spite of guarantees of love spoken throughout, in the end I would have no choice but to ask for a divorce. In all likely hood, I would have asked for it before the third day, because it's the only way I thought of how to stop my wife from going to far. I would have asked for a time out to discuss it. If she continued and had sexual relations, that would be the end.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

everything was great until the end black children destroy ur story u should not write story again

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

It was a great " FANTASY" story. Sometimes people get lost in the fantasy and can't face the reality

stonebow2000stonebow2000over 2 years ago

I liked the shock in the last paragraph.

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