by Vampiric_Mirage
i love this story if only the guy wasnt so psychotic it would b nice if they got 2gether in the end but i would have her teach him a lesson first tie him up and tease his cock and not let him cum and slap him around its perfect poetic justice yay
I really enjoyed the story! It had so many great elements to it! I can't wait to see what happens in the end...or even hopefully in the coming chapters! Keep up the great work!
That was some of the best writing I have ever read on this site! I loved it! Keep it up!
You ramp the suspence up nicely. Good Job. I love reading what you wrote.