All Comments on 'Wishing for Free Use Sluts Ch. 14'

Another great chapter! Interested to see where this is going with the “missing” implant and Tony’s morality!

I would note that there are some weird spots in the editing of this chapter. Not sure if it’s meant to be intentional or just something that slipped by but there are several times where you use a phrase and then immediately use it again within a paragraph. Mighty (in regard to Tina’s orgasm), smiled ear-to-ear, plunged, etc. You use such a nice vocabulary when writing that it reads weird to me when they are repeated in short succession. Like Tony uses all sorts of words for cum but in one paragraph he says “fill her with my spunk” a sentence apart. It just throws me off a bit to have the repetition without it seeming to have a purpose. Haven’t noticed this before in your works so idk

Excellent piece otherwise!

I wonder who is really in control. Tony seems like he is being changed. Now he can’t even remember how he got his powers.