All Comments on 'With Friends Like These... Ch. 02'

Excited for the next chapter!

But awful chapter 2. Stephanie is an interesting character, you should develop her background more. The others are not.

Looks too much like the bad story serie by OrpheusRadius.

And a special thank you to the previous commenter who said it was too similar to my bad story serie.

I hope to see more of this story soon. I like it a lot. Take it as far as you want, ignore people who say it's too much or needs more character development. This is a smut site, folks. If you want well-developed characters and symbolic plot resolutions, go read a book.

Still waiting next chapter...