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Edward1970Edward1970about 3 years ago

Very nice start. I hope to see more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

I decided not to continue to read this story. I don’t like the protagonist. You described him as tall and fat. If that were true the woman would not be able to look into his eyes while blowing him.

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Former military, semi-serious writer. Published a few stories on Amazon as Twisted Dave. I tend to write non-consent/reluctance, took a trip into a romance story, dabble in incest stories and willing to try other genres. I use my writing as a way to cope with everyday stress. ...

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