All Comments on 'Wolf Man Fucks Red Coat to Sleep'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Makes no sense to start a story somewhere in space; no beginning, no character building and you leave the readers confused and wondering what the heck? It seems your story is a chapter from something else; an excerpt. Please don't waste readers time with a tease.

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