All Comments on 'Wolf's Pet Ch. 13'

This story is so GREAT! I can't wait until you write more!

Ugh! Ur killin me! I can't WAIT to find out what happens!!

my curiosity is so damn piqued i'm gonna scream! what the heck is gary doing? and why the heck is he and his cohorts super wolfy? i really can't wait for your next chapter lil, i hope i don't have long to wait!

in the middle of mating season! And there could be how many more innocent humans females out there? I think right now I fell for Carr the most. I don't believe in the history of any Alpha training is this situation taught!!! And just how big is Gary's Pack? What should Carr expect? How long do I have to wait for the next Chapter?

No really you post a really great speed. I only tease you because you do post so often there has never been a wait as far as I am concerned. So I will make that terribly long wait until next year to get the next chapter.

OMG!!!! amazing. the plot thickens i can't wait for the next chapter I'm in love with the baxter pack. keep up the good work

Girly your killing me here. Come on I saw this today and flipped out just to be hanging. Can we hurry and kill stalker crazy ass Gary like NOW. Good JOB.

Been reading your stories up until this one. I love it! I'm so intrigued by the plot. I wonder what makes the women so special if their family origin is the same. I also worry about the forces matings with the women in the cages. :( I'm sure you'll continue to tease us until it is finally time to know. Keep up the good work! -123udontknowme

I knew that those dreams were significant! And they all have ancestors from Hungary! I wonder if Gary is trying to set himself up as the rightful heir and alpha of a lost pack in Hungary or somewhere in Eastern Europe. And if all of these women are descended from this pack, he could claim them all as members of his pack. This is all speculation, without enough fact and without knowing the significance of the Wolf Moon

I can't wait to see what develops.

*****

Oh man, this series is crazy good. soooo cant wait til the next chapter!!!!

You do a fantastic job of weaving the tale. I just found out bout this story and have been following it, I thouroghly enjoy it. It's a paradox of primitive and advanced, with a dash of sexy for flavor. Oh and just to let ou know I think there is a confusion with the names of Trey and Troy in paragraph 3 on the second page. :) Thank you! I cannot wait to read more.

I have not been able to stop reading. I fell asleep, not due to the story but exhaustion. I did find a few errors-most were minor. I wanted to share the following with you:

"Yes, but they won't like it." Trey was smiling now, thinking of the fight he was going to have with Trey about going to the mountains. The harder Trey fought, the more Troy knew he was healthy.

In the phrase above Trey is fighting with himself; when I believe you mean he is fighting with Troy. ;)

ok found some continuity problems but it doesn't get in the way. I am totally enthralled and read a few chapters every day- sooo incredibly erotic i have read some of your other stories and i loved them all keep it up!

still scratching my head as to why heratage is so important to Phyco Gary.

If Brett was in wolf form when he went to surprise Jen, how did he end up dressed again? Love the story tho! Eager to find put what is so special about the women!

I love this series i've been reading non-stop for about 2 days now. Only criticism I have is how a couple of words are used excessively like: leer, leering, and flurry. Other than that great job! On to ch. 14!!

I love this story, the grammar needs a little work to keep the details clear. The characters and plot are very interesting.

Alphas are supposed to be strong and fearless!

I love your writing it's amazing! I did a one question though. What did you make the women older in age? 52?!

Ok I can't Believe he's keeping those females from finding their mates that's Not Fair!! And I'm not sure how widely this is known or not known but you NEVER ask What Could Happen Next? It INVITES TROUBLE! EVERY TIME!!! Sheesh!!!