All Comments on 'Working for the Ma'am'

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jayaurysmutjayaurysmutover 1 year agoAuthor

This was a really fun story to write. I'm really coming around to dark elves as a monster girl race and have big plans for using them in the future. If you liked this story, feel free to read more like it on my patreon or my books on amazon. https://www.patreon.com/JayAury

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

6 stars… more dark elven mistresses please

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Just when I thought femdom couldn't get any worse than usual, I see it in a fantasy setting and realize I was wrong.

Pokenonymous2Pokenonymous2over 1 year ago

I need more. This is my #1 fantasy

4Leather4Leatherover 1 year ago

He had no chance from the get go. Have me hooked as he is then when the collar was placed around he neck and the leash sealed it. Can’t wait for the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Part 2 ?

IpreferpiIpreferpiover 1 year ago

Alright I love this

IpreferpiIpreferpiover 1 year ago

Alright I love this

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

My inner nerd is showing, my favorite part is not the amazing sex, it’s that the drow can cast faerie fire like in d and d

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Most of these intoxicating stories, that you have deliciously written, don't include much character development.

In this story, for example, Jonathan, as we are told is ready for college, but must pay his own way. This was his parent's wish. Is he still living at home? What are his parents reaction to his sudden shift in hours / job? Was he let go (fired) from his restaurant job. Perhaps he quit or just simply vanished leaving everyone he knew wondering, worrying & searching for him.

I digress. Yours are Femdom hypnotism claim, train & conquer a man worthy of slavery. Such is my task to read every mind control story given me by my Wife er Mistress. Mistress is set & determined to have me train myself when she isn't doing that same conditioning during my sleep.

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