All Comments on 'Writer's Block Pt. 01'

Great start! Looking forward to Part 2.

Well written erotica, very enjoyable

Nicely written and very erotic. Under the initial premise he could have kept going longer before pausing, which would have made it even better…

Strange... You mentioned her breasts, but don't use any size-based descriptor. In fact, you don't use much description or detail at all, which really hurts the eroticism of it.

Great start.

Tess (uk)

Very intriguing beginning. When he walks away, I thought he was getting "pirate stuff," like an eye patch, a plastic hook, knee-high boots.

A hunter's knife seems a tad excessive to me. Better safe than sorry.

Wonderfully imagined and perfectly written 5 star erotica!