All Comments on 'XX Marks The Spot'

Oh that was a fun read.

A bit predictable, but I read a lot on this site.

It was good writing.

Not full of ugly terms and completely believable.

There could be another chapter, but why ?

I would leave it as they lived happily ever after.

Interesting topic. This story is a good read. Could Anne get pregnant? Should have been a question asked before.

The penis and testicles is believable, but with the testicles the natural breasts are not.

A writer would know this because a writer would have done the little bit of research it would take to learn even a modicum about intersex physiology and biology.

You actually did a disservice to intersex people by writing this in such a manner that makes it seems that interested is simple and straightforward, a few simple oddities physically.

When writing about a disability, especially a socially maligned disability, one needs, at the very least to be respectful of a person's humanity, know a little bit about it.

You, obviously, didn't care enough to be respectful.