All Comments on 'Young Abin Ch. 01: The Landlady'

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AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

I could imagine a sequel. What do you think about her mother catching them fucking? Her mother is a bitter, rather ugly and fat woman and around sixty years old....

free_our_mindfree_our_mind12 months agoAuthor

This is a classic Chinese full-length adult novel. I'm trying to translate it into English. I'm glad to know you like it :)

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Being a patient and understanding teacher, I followed your disconnected English to the end...

PLEASE get an editor. There are too many grammatical errors AND incorrect usage.

free_our_mindfree_our_mind12 months agoAuthor

Thanks for your feedback. I also read some popular stories on the site recently to improve my English translation skills. In the next post, I hope to find a volunteer editor to help modify it.

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