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"Absolutely," Shawna agreed. "You'd never know that you all weren't seasoned actresses." She turned to Tim. "If we can just get our lead actor to be a little more respectful..."
"Oh, come on," Tim said, grinning. "I thought I behaved myself very well, considering how many beautiful, half-naked women I was surrounded by."
"Oh brother," Anna said.
"He's right, though," Becky said. "You girls all looked great. I'm sure this will come together in editing, and you'll be proud of what we see."
Pam added, "And Tim probably was about as well-behaved as you can expect from a male in these circumstances."
"Hey!" Tim said, in mock outrage.
"I still think we should let the ladies arrange a little wardrobe malfunction for our male lead," Shawna said, smiling. Several of the other women clapped and seconded that idea.
"You'd love that, wouldn't you?" Tim asked, giving Shawna a cocky grin right back. "It's too bad our target audience just wants to see some hotties being exposed, isn't it?"
Shawna and a few of the other girls grumbled good naturedly. But they weren't entirely joking.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 3 years agoI've read all your Young Boss stories and quite enjoyed them. I do think what was inflicted on Tim in the original series was a bit too much of an extreme comeuppance for what happened in the prequel. I think Shawna definitely deserves some karma directed her way for what she did to Tim (way over the top for a misread communication on a spanking). These women supposedly have a crush on this guy, so I'm hoping things don't get too cruel. Iam looking forward to see where it all goes, so keep up the good work.
Anonymousover 3 years agoHi Barefan - I've sent private feedback with my thoughts and ideas. I disagree with JeanCFNM in that its time to get Tim naked now. I think you need to build up the storyline a bit first as it is clear that Tim will be naked in front of around 10 or more females soon. My only concern is that you are painting Tim out to be a lecherous idiot at the moment and this is intended to lead towards a cruel humiliation revenge setting. Up to now all the main characters have been more mischievous rather than cruel and each have been in some way compliant with the fate, having sympathy but taking joy in the nudity - whoever it falls to - And this is what sets your stories apart from so many others.
Anyhow, keep up the good work as I for one am loving it.
JD
Johnny_Dangerous_66
JeanCFNMover 3 years agoSomehow I doubt they would agree to do it but leaving that aside it just wasn't sexy...if they are that enamoured with Tim then they could have gone further.
The title is YOUNG BOSS TRICKED & EXPOSED...but he wasn't except that he is a man and would enjoy it.
Time to expose him...
