All Comments on 'You're Always in My Thoughts'

by Verhaalen

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AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

You write about the sexual experience in such a refreshing and unique way. There is nothing sordid or trite in your description and in these lovers, we see the growth from the experience they have learned. This must be purposeful for you and I greatly appreciate it. A real gift with language and you search for the best and most original phrases to lead us through and imagine an aesthetic experience rather than down and dirty fuckin'. This my third story of yours and I will continue to enjoy your work.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

I think it,s less sensual & verry fast after the excellent part Reckless and loving arrangement .Next part will be foursome with the help of his wife Betty Stan will achieve it Jake & Alan knew that they never become the 🐂 Bull daddy Stan into breed there wives so they gave them ladies night out for there pleasure

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A short story writer in various genres. Of Dutch birth but living in the UK for many years. I appreciate comments but do not respond to them, sorry.