All Comments on 'Yours Ch. 03'

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Anonymousalmost 18 years ago

Super stories

Just another great story. Well written and hopefully true.

KEEP IT UP (the writing) All best JuLee

angeldmomma over 17 years ago

WOW

The descriptions were fantastic, but it was the end that really got to me. A love so deep, is this real? Because so much emotion is put into this that I wonder how it could be fantasy...that part about him saying "it's not the end, it's only the first of many chapters" (sorry if I misquoted) - I cried! Wow, that's all I can say...

Anonymousover 16 years ago

Didn't want it to end!

Loved the whole story, and it was so descriptive, I could have been watching a movie!! Can't wait to hear about more adventures they go on! :-)

Keep up the great writing!

Anonymousabout 13 years ago

PANERA!

Their cinnimon crunch bagels with hazelnut spread is amazing!

Fucking loved the story, amazing writing!

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