Zara

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"I love you."

"And I love you, Zara. The one thing I'll ask is please don't be a stranger."

"I promise I won't. I'm going to visit all the time."

I laid one last kiss on her lips before I slid behind the wheel of my car. Reversing out of the driveway, she followed the car until she stood at the end of the driveway. I pulled the car to the kerb and lowered the window, kissing her one last time.

"I'll see you again soon, Zara."

"I love you, Scott. Forever."

Pulling away, I saw her in the rear-view mirror, my daughter hugging her tightly as I knew she was in tears. Wiping my own cheeks, I flicked on the indicator and turned onto the main road, turning on the radio so I didn't drive along in silence. I knew I'd be returning to a rather quiet house that evening and an empty bed once again.

It broke my heart, as well as hers, but I knew it was a decision that would prove to be for the best.

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A/N - First story of mine that has a sad rather than happy ending, though I think it's quite realistic.

However... However... If there is enough demand to write one, I'll happily write a sequel giving these characters a happy ending.

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AnonymousAnonymous10 days ago

A sad ending, not the one I was hoping for... but wait. A chapter 2 I see. Dare I hope!? I just hope it's not one of those "5 years later" things, she'd been fucked by a bunch of other guys, he's screwed random women, and in the end they end up together and basically they've wasted years apart that could have been spent together. Well let's read on and find out I suppose.

bobhardcastlebobhardcastleabout 1 month ago

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AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

stunning completely absorbed w ur story so look forward to more

Richard1940Richard19406 months ago

i enjoyed it, I would have asked for more but I can see there is a Part 2 so I assume I am not the only one. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Please write a continuance

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