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Click here"I was wondering when my pussy would be on the line." Qilue sung.
"Oh don't worry, there is a locked box with a leash for you, I've even restrained myself from cheating and reading the codeword my merchant wrote on this scroll for you. I wonder where the skeleton's will take you if you crack under my interrogation?" Valda taunted, looming over Qilue.
"You'll find out first hand when I break you, don't forget I'm a therapist, I know all your mental weaknesses."
"Ah, shit. Well if that's how you're going to be I'll let you in on something that was going to be a surprise. You know how I'm so strong we need magic to bring me down. I've decided you have a similar problem, so I bought these." Valda took out another bag full of glyphs. "These are intelligence draining glyphs, if you don't break me in the next couple of days, I will make you a mindless fuck-slave in no time."
"Alright, let's play. Come on Valda Stormaxe, hero of Zenith, strip off your clothes so I can start slapping glyphs on those slutty tits of yours." Qilue ordered.
"Yes warden." Valda replied as she began to peel off her clothes. "Do your worst, it will make it that much more satisfying when it's my turn to play with the degraded slut who used to be Dr. Qilue Mylyl, hero of Zenith."
- COMMENTS
pbflyboyabout 2 months agoGreat story! Always liked magical bondage. Valda is an excellent character and Qilue fits her role well. I would very much like to see more magical shenanigans with these two. Perhaps a quest to find some 'useful' magic items.
Anonymous4 months agoOMG I LOVE Valda! Would be great to read more stories featuring her, even a relatively generic tale featuring her kicking ass as a prequel to this and showing off her pure unbridled strength with your trademark humour
Anonymousalmost 2 years agoI'm going to guess that glyphs are not addictive, so they're better than drugs. Less fun, maybe.
Character development, real dangers, psychological insight, a bit of politics... Very complete. Very well done. Keep the button open Qilue. Let go. Enjoy.
Seems like this story is freely based on a famous tabletop roleplay game. Is it? Not my favourite but is certainly rich and well developed.
As always, thank you for posting it and wating for the next one. (Seems that my other comment has been censored for some reason. It said more or less the same)
-Onkana
Anonymousalmost 2 years agoWeakening glyphs are better than drugs, because they are not addictive in a chemical sense. ;)
It's a well constructed story. Understandable behaviors (still not logical), character growth, psychological insight, a bit of politics... So many things to look at. I could say that the story is too complex for a site where people goes to read about sex, but I would never say such a thing!
I'm going to guess that it is based on the D&D world. I'm not exactly a fan but I have a relatively good knowledge, so, again, well done.
-Onkana
Anonymousalmost 2 years agoYour stories are always great. Nobody describes the excitement of taking risks better. The best part of your stories imo is the inventive scenarios, like this one with a therapist initially trying to be professional but her curiousity letting her get gradually roped into Valda's antics, and that the chase for humiliation is something consensual and fun done for themselves, for own thrill and pleasure. And personally I think that when your stories have powerful women, like the greatest hero of Zenith in this case, or like in The Arrangement and Inducement, willingly indulging in self-degradation it becomes a really exciting story if you manage to write it this well. I also always love a good ending and you did a good job writing the graudally changing relationship between Vanda and Qilue. 10/10 would read again.
