All Comments on 'Free Use Leaders Rise to Power Ch. 03'

You dont like Trump. Leave your politics out of erotica. Youre ruining the story by forcing in your political opinions.

Always considered Literotica a site devoid of politics for its' fictional and non-fictional authors. Unfortunately Ch. 03 has "poisoned the well" for me.

This will be the only chapter that remotely references 'real politics'

If it upsets you, sorry, this chapter isn't for everyone. But as a counter argument, the intention is to take Ashlee's precious virginity in the most degrading way possible. Because after all, wouldn't that be terribly disgusting?

Feedback has been mixed but several readers resent the president character. Noted, and don't worry, it won't be included in the future.

Agreed with the 1st comment. Leave your political views out of it. Just a bad writing.

I don’t usually comment but I agree with the previous one. I very much loved this story and have been anxious to follow Ashely’s trials. However, it’s painfully obvious when you use phrases that have been repeated chronically about trump that you were trying to tie him in. It’s been exhausted in daily life so its especially wearisome to find it here too. Im not saying you can’t have your opinions or express them. But those tid bits fail to add anything to your story, and actually they take from it. I feel as though it dim your creative voice.

I don't think you're ruining the story because of hints of your political opinions. Actually, on a psychological basis, because political figures are appearing so often on the media, people are more susceptible to associate the opinions they have (which they thought were theirs but are honsestly just a collection of their information input from media) to animalistic feelings during sexual arousal. As long as you keep it subtle, you can use both the idolization and the disgust towards a political figure to arouse your audience.

Way to ruin a story your politics are ridiculous and need to be left out of this room

So you did a great job there. Its your story. Do what makes sense for it.

TOTALLY killed my lady boner dead.

exactly how the dude would act. grab em by the pussy

Your political reference didn't ruin the story at all some obviously are just choosing to be a little sensitive

this might have been a bit more subtle and DT is over 70.

For anyone who doesn’t like it, don’t continue reading. Some of us are anxiously waiting new chapters :)

I wish u were a bit more subtle overall still a great read... but it's kinda killing my lady boner like another user mentioned lol.

Still a great read!!