All Comments on 'A Stolen Moment'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Your first story and wisely neither a cuck or ridiculous bbc myth story. Good on you. It was telegraphed throughout but still deserved a rating of 3. Better luck with the next one.

hindsight2020hindsight2020almost 2 years ago

Just because she is L does not mean it is OK. A cheat is a cheat. Period.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

her lesbian pussy? Excuse me?

AppleByBoomAppleByBoomalmost 2 years agoAuthor

Thank you for the comments and reading.😊

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Reads a bit like a typical locker room fantasy from young men with minimal real sexual experience. Not terrible as a first attempt, and you will get better as you learn to write realistic women. So far, a good wank, but nothing memorable.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Huskily breathed? Lesbian pussy? Is this made with ChatGPT?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

I am probably not the target market. Men writing lesbians, for other men, rarely works for me. Visual enough, but shallow.

AnonymousAnonymous14 days ago

Another story written by a dude that can't tell apart lesbian and bi? Just what internet needed.

Next time, try to at least keep both hands on the keyboard, and proofread it.

AnonymousAnonymous3 days ago

The magical penis, turning even lesbians on. Such a popular stereotype, making life a living hell for lesbians that actually cares about their partner.

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