All Comments on 'Dominance Corporation, Inc. Ch. 03'

very very well written and so damn precise it was like a one was there...but then, be there*smile*. And it is a lovely feeling of forgiveness. Thank you for reminding me. Although short this was exceptional and i will very happily read on. i hope you keep this series up it has great potential. respectfully a fan in Texas naynay

I loved your story. Please continue it and let us know what happens next.