All Comments on 'North Valley High Ch. 03'

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hotlead1hotlead1over 9 years ago
I enjoy your work, I honestly do.

However, I have been reluctant to comment on these recent efforts as I feel as if I'm repeating myself. I can't say that I like your last few stories nearly as much as your earlier works. Something has changed, but I don't really know what it is. Perhaps you are trying to appeal to wider audience than before.

The stories have become noticeable briefer and seemingly more abrupt, as if you are in a hurry to wrap them up. There is also a noticeable lack of breast sex and the accompanying dialogue which made earlier works stand out. As I said above, this could have been done deliberately in an effort to appeal to a wider audience, which it may well do.

Regardless, I thank you for the time and effort put forth and will always look forward to future stories.

TheJohnsonator05TheJohnsonator05over 9 years agoAuthor
Thank You

First of all, Thank You so much for being a loyal reader. I will put in more boob action in the future chapters. With Competition Cups, I was more about how much sex I could fit into the chapters. With North Valley High, this seems a bit more realistic to me and I didn't want to put in so much boob action that it became ridiculous. I do have more action involving Jessica's big tits in further chapters, I can say that much without spoiling what I have coming up. I will say this though, Jessica is very much like her cousin Brittney. Certain traits run in the family.

Don't worry; With the chapters that are coming up next, I'll toss in more boob action.

hotlead1hotlead1over 9 years ago
Thanks, I really am a loyal reader of your works.

I realize what a difficult undertaking it is for to crank out new stories on a somewhat regular basis and I appreciate it. I'm also sure than what might please me in a story may make others dissatisfied. We all have different expectations as I'm sure you know. Regardless, I will be looking forward to reading your upcoming efforts. Thanks again.

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It has been a long time since I last updated this. Since then I have done a lot of writing with no intent to submit, at least not yet. I have dug up some old ideas that I have long forgotten. One of them is a prequel of sorts to both Competition Cups and North Valley High. It'...

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