by devioto
I have to say that I'm not a fan of the change in perspective. As the reader, I can't help but identify with the main character (the husband in this instance). I know there are those who enjoy the cuckold perspective, but they probably aren't the same people who enjoy the perspective of the "stealer" like in the earlier chapters. Just my two cents; I really enjoyed the earlier chapters and would love a return to Francois' point of view.
Y'know, if someone were "harassing"/"exploiting" my wife, and I (consciously) knew about it, then they would not live to see the light of day — REGARDLESS of the "circumstances"! The climate, in that "workplace", is — quite, definitely! — "UNHEALTHY!"
(For the Record: I'm NOT a "Prude" — but I DO, however, have my "limits"!)
I, truly, hope that the husband discovers what has "happened", to his wife & Nina, and "takes “appropriate” action", in "freeing" them!
(So far, it's been "All Tease and No Reward" — it is [WAY] PAST "Time, for the ‘CLIMAX’!!!" — "NO MORE FOREPLAY!!!")
Two chapters and no sex at all. It's kind of boring.
And I hope François will not fall down.