All Comments on 'Sweet Release'

Who are these people? How old are they? How do they know each other? Why is the sex just 1/2 a paragraph?

Who are these people? No one in particular

How old are they? Old enough. I'd say in their 30s

How do they know each other? They are aquaintances.

Why is the sex 1/2 paragraph? Is it? I didn't realize. I guess because I like everything fast and to the point. Maybe it's about time I slow down and enjoy the process.

....I don't use names in a lot of my stories. I just think it adds mystery to it, although it might confuse the writer, and if anyone is wondering no this isn't me. In fact this has never happened to me. I just have a very vivid imagination. :)

Not a chance to make my blood boil.

Thanks Don

Everyone is entitled to their own opinion.

i liked it. not sure why the low score - KEEP WRITING! U GET A 5.

Thank you for the wonderful comment. I am very pleased you like it. :)

Just the idea of you getting the sweet release was erotic for me. I'd be throbbing to give you that Sweet Release!