by lovecraft68
Please write more on this story. It was really good and another story about Sammi and Justin should be written. I would love it if you did.
Thanks for the great read!!!!!!
You got this just right. Don't listen to those asking for a sequel - this was the perfect ending. There isn't a story heading 'second time' so leave it just there. Beautifully written - I felt like I really knew these characters.
Write more like this please! The anticipation I felt as I was reading was thrilling to say the least! You have an amazing talent in writing, and clearly an active and vivid imagination. I have found so many stories have a boring redundancy, using the same words or phrases repeatedly. Reading this was refreshing, and it was incredibly sexy.
You write extremely well, I love romantic, and I have a thing for tomboys... what wasn't to love? Oh yeah, it was sexy as hell too.
Great story, well-written and entirely believable, I enjoyed it.
That was really nice I really enjoyed it and you're an awesome writer. If you could write another about them that would be great cuz I'm sure everyone else here would like it if you wrote another one. Thanx and keep writing.
Awesome character building. The build up is excellent. You have talent combined with skill and amazing pacing.
i had married my late wifes sister , didn't last long. 3 years later i married my wife and we were married 27+ yrs until she passed away. should have been her from the start. i looked at her like Justin did Sam. ended up with the best, some times you don't look hard enough!
Outstanding story, well told and well written. I'm one of those who didn't see the "friend" right in front of him and missed what might have been the best course for my life. Enjoyed seeing her force the issue instead of just fading into his history where they might both have regrets.
I've read a few stories before but this was just fantastic. I felt connected to the characters and I felt very similar to the main character which made it even better to read. Great Job and write more like this!
This has to be one of the most beautiful and emotionally stimulating tales I've ever read. I could almost hear, feel, smell, and taste every aspect, every emotion, as well as every single thing Sam and Justin encountered together. Great Job!
M.P.
One of the very best stories that I've read at Literotica! The exchange of emotional passion,intertwined with some sexy love-making made this one big smile!
Terrific setup, amazing ending! I thoroughly enjoyed reading this!
I am highly pleased. When I first started Reading I thought it was going to be boring then I kinda realizes I am like Justin. I kept reading then got drawn in.
Just read this for about the 10th time (Well,the final two pages,at least)! While it would probably be difficult to out do this one,a continuation of Sammi and Justin's romance would be fun to read. It would be interesting to see where it goes from here,to when they start college,and possibly beyond. ~ Remains one of my favorite stories!
As great a story it is, I almost want to see an epilogue of how it all turns out, even if it is simply the standard romantic drivel of "the slut got mad and fucked off and the new couple went on to be perfect for one another". But any epilogues are probably best played out in the minds of the readers like the infinite number of monkeys with The Bard.
... and it was at least as good as the 1st time!
I agree with others that it was a very nice romantic story that included some great sex, and would LOVE to see a follow-up story.
I have read this story numerous times. Each time I think back and wish my first time had been like this instead of with a Jen type.
Thank you dor a great story.
been there done that only it was sisters. got mixed up with 1 first , but ended up with the older 1 . we were married almost 30 yrs before she passed away leaving a big hole in my life. some times a good thing comes your way & you find it.
Thank you for reminding me what it's all about.
Also, for one of the best lines I've read in Literotica:
"Sam let the dress drop to the floor.
My jaw fell with it."
-- just brilliant
I completely enjoyed the interplay between Sam, Samantha and Justin. I was actually afraid that he was going to be stupid and not realize what Samantha was giving him. You communicated his lust and dispair along side of her delicate and fragile truth. You have reminded me of just what it means to love someone. Thank you so very much.
that my first time had been like this. Refreshing to read a story that maintains my interest and is so arousing as real friends come together.
Really enjoyed the story the feeling of actual love and the way it ended in conversation not "he came on her. The end." As most stories do
Is if Jen were to show up later that day... maybe with a female friend tagging along as she gets dropped off (just to make sure he's home, of course)...
And when she knocks.... An obviously freshly fucked hair messed smelling of sex and wearing one of his T-shirts mostly unbuttoned Sammi were to be the one answering the door...
And if would be CLEAR that Sammi was HOT... and word would spread like wildfire that Jen had been "dumped" for this scorchingly hot little number...
Playing a guy is one thing... having him quit the game while you're doing it and him coming up better FOR it... Priceless.
I've read it before and I'll read it again in a year or so. It always makes my day.
Finding the one that is right for you is always a treat.
Keep up the good works.
Ramjet
1st time and romance tale. a couple more pages to include sticking it in jens fa ce woulda been fantastic.
5 stars ******s
...how this story is so real. I mean, even on their first night they don't suddenly become lovesick fools. This story takes us down a full journey. I also like how their friendship arc was developed. Marvelous work @lovecraft68!!!
Waiting for more.
I can't actually think of a way this story could be better. That's a first for me. 6 Stars!
I really wanted to say how much I enjoyed this story. Very good. I know it's a little after it was written but Good stories are timeless.
I thought this was the most beautiful stories I have read here. When you first started the story I felt certain that a piece of sky would fall and hit you in the head and knock some sense into you. You had this great girl around you and you were too I blind to see what, I am certain was a great life after you came to your senses. A any matter
It was a great story and I wish I could give more than five stars. Keep writing! Please.
Great Beautiful story.. Just when you have it all right in front of you and your so blind to see it.. The way it was written.. Start up the ups and downs. And now the final climax. And love at the end amazing..
This is by far the best story I've ever read on this site :)
Loved it ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
probably one of your best stories yet, the emotion, the love, you had it all. and lets not forget the sex. wow. the only thing that would have made this story better is telling that slut what she missed out on.perhaps a sequel?
I only wish my tomboy friend had convinced me not to marry the psycho bitch I married. My life would have been completely different.
Great story, thank you. Maybe I'll try to tell my story some day.
I love the combination of slight drama in the story, and I couldn't lie about loving the other ...... parts. ;)
Very good the emotion the love all were captured very well by you
It requires a sequel it is one of your best stories worth a 5star
Beautiful! Guys can be thick sometimes, especially young guys thinking with their dicks. More of us should have friends like Sam.
Well written, and Sam is such a beauty!
What a great story! It parallels some things that took place in my life many years ago, and I was thrilled to be able to re-live those great memories. Thank you so much.
That was a wonderful story, just like you said. It started out slow, then got hot.
Very well done, glad you had fun writing it. I know I really enjoyed it.
Very realistic, the couple where true to life. Lovely.
First time I've read any of your stories. Hope it's a worthy introduction to other stories you've written. Yowza!
I thought you did a great job. This is the first of your stories I've read and thoroughly enjoyed it,.
Okay then, I come here to read a quick fix and instead I find this gem. I am quite surprised that you managed to spread out one sex scene over three pages and yet you (in my opinion) didn't waste any words. Wow! However, because of who I am, I do have one criticism and that is I felt you could have cut off the last couple of sentences. You have a wonderful story that is about sex and love and passion and etc. and then end it with a "and you can you come on my face if you want" ending. Not very sexy or passionate, in my opinion.
it was a fantabulous tale and well written, to my me anyhow
I have but just only 5 stars to give for rating
Lovely! Moving! Sensible! Your story shows that love can still prevail...
all are absolutely fantastic.
my only regret is that I can award only Five Stars cause thatr all allowed.
in reality these are 10 star tales.
the story was absolutely fantastic. Please write anoter part or more first time stories.
OH YEAH!! FIRST LOVE IS A WONDERFUL THING. WELL DONE. SENSITIVE NOT SCHMALTZY
Absolutely amazing unlike some of the other things onthe site this actually has story behind it which made it incredible id like to hear mpre from u overall fantastic five star message on comments if u want to publish anything i am the person to do that
I would like to offer you a chance to get this published as an erotic short story text me back about what you want to do.
Very nice job on a great story. Young love, first time, doesn't get any better. Keep up the great work.
...after such a wonderful story - what can I read that matches this brilliant one,Eh ?
So very enjoyable - more please !!
I am not a frequent reader of lit and was not interested in erotic stories too. One of my friend suggested me this story as a starter and here I am, awestruck by the details in the story and how I want my first to be same.
First let me say that I love your work. This story in particular is superb. It's beautifully paced. I even stopped jerking off to read to the end. Keep up the good work.
Bloody hell, this is not only an amazing piece of erotic writing, its a brilliant piece of literature. I absolutely loved every word, and even kept reading after cumming to find out the end.
The story is well-written, but its qualities go far beyond that. It made me care about the characters, because they felt real and authentic and utterly likeable. And that is what great stories do - they breathe life into the characters, give us a glimpse in their lives, lives that feel real.
Lovecraft68, thank you for that story and thank you for bringing Justin and Samantha to life, so we may get to know them.
You are a fucking God Omg I can not describe how good this is it is so good... I...I loved it I really did
. . . between a sex story and erotic literature. Well done on delivering the latter.
I wish that I had had a friend or should I say girlfiend like Sam at that age.
Thankyou
I-I can't tell you how good this was for me, you are an incredible writer, you know how to cook this up man. You take your time right up to the boiling point and you definitely know how to set up a climax. *wink*
I've read several of your stories. This is my favorite. Just re-read it for the second time. It was even better than the first!
This was a great, completely believeable story with hot sex and a happy ending. It could benefit from more careful editing. The use of the profane word "Goddamn" added nothing to the story, but for me detracted from it.
This is the best shit ever !!
Absolutely luv it
Keep up the good work .
I love reading ur stories
That was so beautiful. I was friendzoned for over 6 years and the only way I got over her was to totally stop seeing her. This is how I wished our lives had played out.
This is the first of your stories I've read and now I'm going to catch up on your other stuff.
Great writing, awesome character development and very very human and real, absolutely loved it.
Please keep up the great work, 5 starts from me and thank you for this little tale.
A very Good story. But why do you Americans, when you are involved in something lovely, beautiful and amazing, describe it with the Damn" word, as done frequently in this story as shown in the quotation in the "title of your comment" heading. I ask as damn is such a negative condemning word, and don't understand why it would be used in these situations, when words like amazing, Awesome, Fantastic etc would be more appropriate! I'm not being judgmental, just asking as I find it confusing.
This is a dream of all of those friend zoned, that choose to remain friends with the one they care for.
The store was hot and brought back memories from my youth.of finally getting her to see me as more than a friend.
To the anonymous wondering about word choice, it is merely a usage of an American slang affectation. Some of our slang usage looks odd on paper, as without the spoken word and inflection, the emphasis and true intent can be lost.
So close to my wife`s and my story , best buddys first ,then lovers 40 years ago and still at it
I was unable to stop that night when I began to read it. Your story is actually very charming and your love scene very well written. We live it. We all have such memory but not all had such nice ending... The boundary between friends and lovers is sometimes thin, true!
You might improve with deeper analysis of the characters, and more complex story (less predictable). But once again it is very good. Thanks.
Still one of the very best love stories ever and one of my favorites.!!!!!!!
it was so cute and perfect. You definitely meant it, it was definitely worth the wait. awesome. bravo lol
You should have brought Jen back so Justın could ıntroduce her to hıs newly found LOVE!
Make this a series, if it isn't one already. I just found this and read it, and damn. Bravo.
Just finished reading and enjoyed it immensely.
You had a very good balance of emotional involvement and literotica to create a story with redeeming grace and quality entertainment.
Thanks, look forward to more from you.
This should have a sequel...or 12. I agree with the previous poster...Make this a series....
Just found this story and was just going to read the first page or two then I could not stop please write more about the love these two have found and the sex was good too LOL good night and I will have sweet dreams.
This GREAT story is ripe for a follow-up!
- How about, "That's What Girlfriends Are For." ?
- Would just love another carefully crafted story that explores the expansion of the couples' relationship/love,the bumps in the roads,all leading to a happy ending,of course.
- Then there could be,"That's What Wives Are For",followed by "That's What Children Are For",and wrapped up with,"That's What Assisted Living Is For".
Where was Sam when I was at that age.
A lovelly idea, maybee a bit to much sex, nice that he managed to confess his love at the end, romantic.
Read this story five times and its still fresh each time brilliant
This was good enough that I kept thinking, "What a dumbass" that he didn't tell Samantha that he loved her earlier, and that's the kind of thought that you can have only when you are into the characters.
You have real talent and this story was just incredible. This deserves an award or something. Best story ever and I would love to see a series with these characters.